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  1. Magical

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    We sit here, together,
    under the shady tree
    with purple lilacs near by,
    hearing the songs of passers by
    —children and birds alike.

    We sit here in our togetherness
    with the sun that shines upon us,
    in peace, in quiet, in solace
    but not solitary,
    for we have the tree
    that stands before us
    and the grasses beneath our feet,
    and most of all
    we have the song of the soul inside of us
    waiting to be heard,
    waiting to be shared
    because that's what songs do.

    Yes, we sit here beside one another
    with a song in the heart,
    so if you ever wonder
    what it is that you might do
    the answer is
    to sing them
    in the celebration of the life
    that you have
    existing here inside of Me
    the Spirit of love.
    ________________________
    *Morning Star's Light - Home

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    M/star, NICE, a small bit of reflection,some alone time to enjoy our suroundings


    Posted By tham | Aug 11, 2012
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    Thank you!

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    very cool. enjoyable read. not that it matters, but i'm just gonna be a jerk and point out that in my opinion there should be some kind of break after
    (like a comma or whatever) ...and then maybe a colon after
    thank you for the great write. :)


    Posted By jakeminick | Aug 15, 2012
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    Thanks for your comment Jake, and for your suggestions.
    Glad you liked the poem.

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