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    You are God’s greatest gift to me
    You always encourage me to succeed
    Very seldom do we disagree
    You give me almost all I need

    You take care of the little things
    That I so thoughtlessly forget
    How else could I live like a king
    To you I owe a great debt

    You’re such a powerful creature
    Who can either destroy or uplift your man
    At times I may find you to be my teacher
    As a wise woman you have a definite plan

    For all the wonderful things you do
    I truly love, but it’s hard for me to express
    Just the mere thought of you
    Accentuates my happiness

    Where would I be without you?
    This is your chance to witness true praise
    At times I may not have a clue
    Yet your inner beauty truly amazes

    I realize no other pleasure’s so intense
    Than the intimacies between woman and man
    And the anticipation keeps me in suspense
    For you have me in the palm of your hands

    At that moment, the look in your eyes
    Gives me the signal to proceed
    With those things we fantasize
    Based on what we’ve agreed

    You are more than just an instrument of pleasure
    Whose only purpose is to answer to my sexual commands
    Your value is a thing I could never measure
    Will you forgive me for making such outrageous demands?

    To you a debt of gratitude is owed
    For me not recognizing your worth
    I appreciate those times you didn’t explode
    You could’ve brought me hell on earth

    Motivator, cheerleader, educator, comforter, freak
    It’s your strength I’m always drawn
    Emotionally you’re not at all weak
    And the list goes on and on

    You are one of God’s most precious creations
    There is so much beauty in all you do
    I’m so blessed for our situation
    Please help me understand you
    :girlwacko: :girlwacko: :girlwacko: :girlwacko:


    Posted By ronn55 | Dec 23, 2006
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    Benny New Member

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    Ahh, yes...always sing the song of love to your spouse...let them know over and over what they should know...it is always great to hear these.


    Posted By Benny | Dec 25, 2006
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    bush poet New Member

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    Well that ought to put you in the good books Ron. :hug: :welldone:


    Posted By bush poet | Dec 26, 2006
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    Altree94 VIP Member

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    Ron, from a woman's perspective - it is not only great to hear this (over and over), we NEED to hear this! But it won't get you into the good books if you are writing it from the doghouse! It sure is a great start though!


    Posted By Altree94 | Dec 26, 2006
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    Dear Ron,

    Very well executed, and the content was as beautiful, as the woman you speak of.

    {{{{*~*~*~*Painted*~*~*~*}}}}

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