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    nomadicrhymer JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    Undying Passion

    Passion lingers in the air
    I see by the dampness of your hair
    that you need just a moment to breathe
    before I fulfill my never-ending need
    to sink slowly inside you and become one
    to merge our bodies under the sun
    to feel the quivering of your pulse
    the quickening breath and sharpened kiss
    oh, for nothing would I miss
    the look of love glistening in your eyes
    your tender touch upon my cheek
    it makes me positively weak
    for love with you is a roller coaster
    up one side and down the other
    never knowing which little bend
    will bring it all to a perfect end
    only to start all over again!


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    sagesweetwater Lesbian Novelist

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    Erotic pace with tender wordplay. I love the simplicity of these lines. The message of love is clear to your readers, nomadicrhymer. Nice to read you.

    Sage
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    Hey NOMADICRHYMER - very nice piece! This poem has erotic elements yeah - but the PASSION.... your poem speaks to me of soulmates enjoying a tumultuous rendezvous of AWESOME SEX lol...

    To sink slowly inside you and become one
    To merge our bodies under the sun
    To feel the quivering of your pulse


    Loved those lines - especially the "becoming one" part - All I can say is - It surely must be nice!

    Nice write - Thanx for sharing it.

    Jacquii.


    Posted By MsJacquiiC | Dec 1, 2006
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    nomadicrhymer JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    Hey, Ms.J!!! happy you liked this one...just going back to make sure I've been courteous an replying to all my commentators...thanks for reading!!

    Nomad

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