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    UNINTENTIONAL
    Like two cats mating at midnight
    The moans and groans
    The sighs and cries
    Captured the attention of the neighbors and passers by
    All because of a bed situated under a window
    Unintentionally left open
    ©dp

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    This one is funny. The cats in my neighborhood are so loud; they wake me up during the night sometimes - scaring the heck out of me. I'm glad you don’t live next door. LOL :girl-LOL:


    Posted By JolieH | Jul 21, 2007
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    LOL don't worry I live alone now, it's real quiet *wink* Thanks for reading it...a sense of humor is good now in then when it comes to poetry...

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    excellent write and very witty thanks for the laugh
    hugs kisses
    bear


    Posted By Bear | Jul 21, 2007
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    Thanks Bear...it was based on a true story :blush2: ...ooops!
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    LOL Danette! I love this! Laughing my azz off here in PA. Remember to close the window...;) lol Excellent write! I love your brevity and range in your poetry......awesome poetess.

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    Thanks Kimberly...life is too short not to have fun and be brave...isn't it?

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    Danette,

    There is something about finding out what was unintentional that makes it exciting...no?

    My fav:

    Whoa!

    Thanks for sharing!

    Jerry

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    Thanks Jerry! At first the open window was *gasp* then it was *giggle*...so yes you might be right...

    KayaOtah happy as ever

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    Wow, based on true story...??
    Such rare chance to see cats mating,
    I only hear cats fighting...
    Remember to close your windows next time!!
    Thanks for the nice poem.
    *smiles*


    Posted By KayaOtah | Jul 26, 2007
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    Thanks Kayanta...sometimes in the heat of the moment windows are forgotten...

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    HAHAHA... I'm lovin it! that totally sucks when u forget to close the window too.. lol.

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    *sheepish grin*
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