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    Unloved flower, dark and deep
    Like the blood you often weep
    Sweet elixir on your breath
    Crown of thorns until your death
    Wayward winds beat you down
    In love’s pain, you always drown
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    Dear Danette,

    I swore you wrote this for me. lol. Seriously, I love the brevity of your work and the dynamic affect it has. Emotion just dripped off of this canvas. Sinfully sweet. What was your inspiration for this piece? Loved it!

    {{{~~~***PD***~~~}}} :)

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    The Inspiration...

    ...is me and my life...this is how I feel right now at this point in my life...The version I posted on my 360 blog said Burden of thorns instead of crown, which one do you like better??? I couldn't decide...Thank you for always being so supportive :sun:
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    Hey Poetry...:wavey:,

    I think I would go with Burden as it is alittle more closely related to the effect, and emotion you felt and are depicting. Let me tell ya, you are one talented lady...awesome!

    Much Luv,

    Kim ;)

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