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    nomadicrhymer JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    Who knew life would mark the day I met you,
    that I would discover a feeling, color it blue?
    Who knew the sweet words you whispered by my bed
    would keep time, resounding in my head?
    Memories scatter, like clams in the ocean,
    struggling to stay put, being washed up on sand.
    It still doesn't change the on-going emotion,
    that strives to be a whisper, but ascends to a shout!
    Misery shrieked in like a long-awaited train,
    carrying passengers of fear, sorrow, and oh yeah! Pain!
    Oh gilded lily of love, what is your gain?
    You have performed on life's last stage,
    for these actors expect no mercy, just rage!
    Having paid the price to attend the farce,
    some still expect a taint of decency…
    to survive the curtain call, and cheer the cast.
    Sadly, Decency went home too early,
    abandoning acclaim and call to duty.
    Decency you say? Hello!
    Where did you go, my Romeo?
    My constant heart held none enthralled,
    a sweet noose
    of love
    Unrequited!
    Oh, if I could only…
    fly backwards like the hummingbird, and
    roll back the time - space continuum…
    avoid love's wild dart aimed my way…
    run with powerful hind feet, leaping and bounding
    like the stag to avoid being prey!


    © nomadicrhymer

    Echoes Poetic Princess

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    well-penned, nice sense of emotion, enjoyed the read:bravo:


    Posted By Echoes | Dec 10, 2006
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    nomadicrhymer JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    What ever happened to Ms. Echoes!!

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    this was fine, fun, and fantastic
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    nomadicrhymer JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    Thanks for checking it out, Erik...

    Nomad

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