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    BrianFuchs New Member

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    inside, a herd of tiny buffalo stampede me towards my next moments
    occasionally, they pause to graze on memories I’m done with and information I just never used
    and then they grow restless again
    snorting and butting heads, kicking the ground and grunting
    and in tandem they all start off again
    some days I wish I could tame them, corral them into a fence and brand them
    but in doing so, I might stop being me

    3.15.2008


    As a point of reference, I wrote this about ADD. It could certainly be applicable to many other situations as well though. I went ahead and capitalized the "I's" for those who would prefer it, but originally, they were not.


    Posted By BrianFuchs | Apr 23, 2008
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    This is expressed so well and I can relate.
    Yes it can be about many different disorders.
    Great metaphor, great write!


    Posted By Moonchild | Apr 24, 2008
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