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    [Beautiful+Danger] Devious

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    You conflict seeker!


    Hearts are breaking


    And you sit there
    stunned by the guilt
    you don't feel...


    YOU were my world

    My...
    Everything.

    When the sun ceases to shine
    I'll know your love has died.


    And so have I.

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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    :wow: - What a write BEAUTIFUL! This poem wastes no words at'all! The matter-of-fact way you've "SPOKEN" is just so very poignant.

    A bit of anger without hostility. Honesty without bitterness.
    Truth is imperative here and I think you've spoken your truth loud-n-clear.
    Excellent write - Thanx for sharing it!

    Jacquii.


    Posted By MsJacquiiC | Dec 20, 2006
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    [Beautiful+Danger] Devious

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    Thanks for your comments! Much appreciated. Yeah, the subject i wrote this about is just being annoying me now. There's no deep feeling to it anymore. Just surface pain.
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    mmmm - I know what you mean
    Actually seems like I could've written that poem meself, as I sooooo hate annoying - It's well written too ;)

    Jacquii.


    Posted By MsJacquiiC | Dec 20, 2006
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    [Beautiful+Danger] Devious

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    Yeah annoying is bad.

    mangodroplet Blue Mango Puppy :]

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    wow...so simplistic yet ...it's like a picture speaks a thousand words...:]
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    I loved the strong emotion...since I've been there! Short and to the point! :whistle3:

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    [Beautiful+Danger] Devious

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    Thanks for the comments guys! Much appreciated :)

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