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Discussion in 'Emotional Romantic' started by MrsRivera, Mar 16, 2007.



    MrsRivera New Member

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    Beyond Love

    You are my answer
    Even though there is no question
    Our Souls dance together every night
    Just knowing
    Loves overflowing
    I cry because our love is too hard at times to contain
    My human body cannot sustain
    but it is the sweetest pain
    I cherish every fraction of the second-
    that I hear your voice
    that I touch the letter your hands held
    That I remember the feeling of complete bliss
    within your kiss
    I think of you and become overwhelmed
    With you I enter a different world
    another realm
    Of love truer than truth
    more honest than honesty itself
    Please take this in as if it is the first time
    you've heard these words
    Understand that I am limited in my expression,
    regardless of my projection
    or my in depth selection
    This love far surpasses
    any language taught in classes
    If I could create a dialect to capture us....
    I would spend my lifetime perfecting it
    just to see the smile upon your lips.

    "Sarah Rivera"


    Posted By MrsRivera | Mar 16, 2007
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    nomadicrhymer JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    Hi Sarah::wavey:


    How come doesn’t this one have a title?

    "Love Beyond" might be a good one, but I can understand your not naming it actually, because you have managed to put into words a feeling so transcendent that it almost only can be expressed within one’s heart and spirit…I feel inadequate calling this a beautiful poem…but it was a wonderful experience reading it.


    :bunny: :yay:



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    Thanks sooo much,
    that means alot

    This is one that I hold very close to my heart/soul.
    I like your title, however I would probably switch it around to "Beyond Love"
    What do you think of that ?


    Posted By MrsRivera | Mar 16, 2007
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    aha! there! that's much better!! Wonderful!

    Nomad

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