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    Sally Roberts Forestdawn

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    Must I now remain untitled
    With no one to speak my name?
    No one to whisper comments
    No words that sound the same?

    Untitled means unfinished
    With one final missing piece,
    Without the frosting on the cake
    It would not be complete.

    How can there be a circus
    "Neath the Big Top's greatest shows?
    How can you call a clown, a clown
    Without his big red nose?

    In all these situations
    So many of them idoled,
    There's no one here to speak my name
    'Cause I still remain untitled.

    erikestabrook JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    Sally this was so awesome,
    I must be getting really excite dnow I have your book coming yeah,
    your poems are so delightful this is one of my faves
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    Dear Sally,

    OMG! Only you can bring out that oh so familiar Sally signature you have in your writes. That was so great! I loved it!! I love when artists scribe about the unusual, anomalies, oddities, unspokens, things we daily think about (and not think to write about) and life's feelings and things taken for granted. Your rhyme was dynamite here, delightful, whimsical, humorous, a little sad, made me smile, made me agree (and talk to this poem, and say yes, Sally, that is so true), and etc. You did that for me, as you do in all your canvas' Sally. I love reading your work, as I have said before, is such a treat on the weekends. Loved it!!! Beautifully crafted and executed.

    {{{{{KIM}}}}}:)

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