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Discussion in 'Creative Traditional' started by Aste, Sep 26, 2007.



    Aste Intellectual Teen

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    Touched by Tethered Tutor,
    Taught by Tragic Times
    Tentative Treacheries Await Thee
    Trailing Tell-Tale Crimes

    Forgotten for foggy frenzy
    Fiery fear is feigned
    Flee from me forever
    Falling far from fitfully maimed

    Ecstatic even in each Elegy
    Elevated from every evening evasion
    Every Essence Enthralled
    Escape endured through each equation

    Static sticks so silently
    Stitching Stilts to Storming Strangers
    Salivating Savages Safely Satisfied
    Sweetly Saving Softer Dangers


    Posted By Aste | Sep 26, 2007
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    Aumakua Misunderstood

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    Wow this is so well written i don't get half the words X.x x.X

    Awsome job on the poem and confusing me :D


    Posted By Aumakua | Sep 26, 2007
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    Aste Intellectual Teen

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    Hehe, Thanks. :] I totally forgot I wrote this. I guess that's what i get for writing it at Three Am. xD


    Posted By Aste | Sep 26, 2007
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    JolieH JPiC Contributor

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    Victoria,
    You have such complicated ideas. I have to consult my dictionary to understand you. LOL
    You know that gives me great pride.

    :bee:


    Posted By JolieH | Sep 26, 2007
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    leaddoginteriors CON-FUSALED

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    most brilliant ideas hapen at 3:00am, great job! I too am proud, you are a very talented young lady and the World will be yours.
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    nomadicrhymer JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    Vicki, I love the reading of this poem...one of my fave things to do is to write the way you have...even when I'm writing normal sentences...matching all the first letters. It seems to create a special connection within the poem.

    Pretty neat poem!

    Nomad

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    excellent penning Aste
    hugs kisses
    bear


    Posted By Bear | Oct 12, 2007
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