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    I AM


    Posted By zaac | Mar 8, 2011
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    Umm..I'm glad you are.
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    Posted By MsJacquiiC | Mar 13, 2011
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    David,
    Well, I agree with Gail. I am glad you are...
    I am looking forward to reading some of your work of Art.
    I shall be waiting for you to show your new creations and compositions.
    All the Best.
    Kind Regards,
    Starry.:grandpiano::reading:


    Posted By stardust | Mar 20, 2011
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    lol...msj has been after me to write somethin, so being the wise guy i am...well you know. yes i'll be writing soon after surgery next week. I wont be moving much so i may as well make it productive time lol. New material is coming forthwith. you cant rush the good shit. lol zaac

    z


    zaac


    Posted By zaac | Apr 13, 2011
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    such, honest, genuine writing. no filler. amazing flow. i am going to print it out, post it on my wall and recite it over and over again. my mouth taste like ambrosia every time i say it.


    Posted By jakeminick | Apr 13, 2011
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    Absolutely agree - but "I am" ??? :LOL:

    ROFLMAO - too funny :crazy:


    Posted By MsJacquiiC | Apr 14, 2011
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    Zaac,
    I agree with you. You should be you, and a true you.
    I just can't wait to read your new poems, songs or other kind of good writings.
    God bless you, Zaac, and all those you love!!
    Good luck with your surgery!! I'll be praying for you, David.
    Blessings,
    Starry.:hooray:

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    :hello:Zaac,
    I agree with you. You should be you, and a true you.
    I just can't wait to read your new poems, songs or other kind of good writings.
    God bless you, Zaac, and all those you love!!
    Good luck with your surgery!! I'll be praying for you, David.
    Blessings,
    Starry.:hooray:


    Posted By stardust | Apr 17, 2011
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    The name by which God identified himself to Moses. Also, the way Christ identified himself to the soldier who came to arrest him. At its pronouncement they all fell backward to the ground. Certainly did elicit interesting responses.


    Posted By Gamaliel | Apr 18, 2011
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    Wow! And yours is definitely the most interesting response. Obviously I didn't even think on that theosophical level. But certainly am glad you did. Made for an interesting read. More interesting than the original post even LOL

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    The responses are more entertaining than the original item, so maybe that was the whole point.


    Posted By aztek | Apr 20, 2011
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    But then we'd all have to concede that zaac used a bit of genius to illicit such responses. And I simply refuse to believe that there's any genius about zaac :crazy: LOL - just kidding.

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    That may well be true. We'll just have to wait and see what else Zaac comes up with.


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    He's been around JPiC since we first opened back in 2006. So I'm confident he'll have much more poignant work to share than "I AM" :chuckle:

    [MENTION=277]zaac[/MENTION] Hmmm - I saw you posted a piece on Facebook! Gonna share it here? hmmm

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    quite honestly i dont think
    it can get more poignant MsJ

    It says everything about my life
    anyone needs to know.

    Because it makes one think
    what it took in life to get
    a soul to the point


    where he or she can say...l i know who i am

    and whats better...i did it in two words.

    and yes more and better is coming
    you have no idea


    Posted By zaac | Apr 26, 2011
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    Seriously? Really? No more poignant than "I AM" -- If you're going to seriously argue that, you should have made "law" your career field of choice. Also "I AM" doesn't really speak on "who" you are - but rather, simply that indeed you are... Hmm - Perhaps I should've been an attorney too :LOL:

    Now - this piece (this most recent response) is more poignant than the "I AM". Perhaps you should have posted that :rolleyes: You so silly!

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    now you know the power of the word...its just which one do you choose to pay attention to. i only gave you two. lol

    z


    Posted By zaac | Apr 27, 2011
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    Touche LOL

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    as barney fife says...now, andy dont be fasishuss, dont be fasishuss.

    if you took your statement, every time you read the words I AM, it tastes like ambrosia, you're on the right track. go with it.

    z

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    you sprinkle a few seeds some fall in fertile ground...but sometimes they fall in the cracks where there is little dirt and no room to grow...and sometimes they fall on stones, easy targets for the birds. you just have to know which is which...or how not to worry about it at all.


    Posted By zaac | May 7, 2011
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    Re: I AM

    MsJ,

    must beg to differ on your notion that I AM says nothing more than i exist. Extrapolate that out for a bit. If i know i exist, there is more to me than a pulse and air passing through my lungs, or head, depending on your opinion. that being the case, if i can make a two word statement like this, which incidentally now has 555 reads lol, it means that i looked into myself past the skin i'm in. extending that thought, if i did that, then i must have seen all the good the bad and the ugly, everything people told me that i was or wasnt, threw out the lies and horseshit, and grabbed onto life with a death grip, survived the transformation, and know that being able to say those two words free of the past, of wounds, of my own sabatoge isnt a place everyone gets to in life. so in gratitude to my Creator, and in ecstatic amazement, I stand to say, I AM.

    Kind of a short hand whitebread way of saying....

    how u like me now?


    Posted By zaac | May 8, 2011
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