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    Kit Carson JPiC Contributor

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    There was a time when I was surrounded by light

    The forces of good were very strong within
    But the minions of the dark said, “Come, look at sin.”

    Being such an enlightened soul, I just knew
    This was simply a Hell of a way to have fun
    And after all, it is said, “To thine own self be true.”

    And in my dark paradise, I was oh so cool and fine
    The pleasures waiting there were ever so divine

    Never figured out why I was left lonely, surrounded by night

    Mike Carson
    4-8-2008


    Posted By Kit Carson | Apr 13, 2008
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    Mysty JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    wow..... Kit.... this should be posted as a warning for every married man thinking of straying. I quite like this ..... short and succinct. Excellent !

    Mysty


    Posted By Mysty | Apr 13, 2008
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    Kit Carson JPiC Contributor

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    Yes...very much so! Thanks!


    Posted By Kit Carson | Apr 13, 2008
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