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Discussion in 'Creative Traditional' started by lanaia74, Nov 1, 2006.



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    Mama, don't send me up the dark stairs alone
    You tell me since I've been bad something horrid will get me
    As I walk up the stairs I hysterically cry and moan
    The upstairs terrifies me, you see.

    This big old house I bet is a hundred years old
    No telling how many imprints of evil were left here
    The upstairs is so dark, damp, and cold
    Spank me mama, but don't send me up here.

    I fear the evil man you said would get me
    Don't you realize this will affect me the rest of my life?
    Don't you care how I will grow up to be?
    Not caring this would cause me such strife?

    The darkness here feels like it is smothering me
    I feel the pressure of the dark and it's hard to breath
    I would rather take a beating than be up here, see
    Oh, how I wish from this awful place I could leave.

    So here I sit all alone imagining my worst fears
    As a child this place I would have gladly defied
    As an adult though I must dry my tears
    But I will always remember this place that used to make me cry.


    Posted By lanaia74 | Nov 1, 2006
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    Benny New Member

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    yeah...I understand a bit of this one. Feels good to get it out, doesn't it? Good write...haunting.


    Posted By Benny | Nov 1, 2006
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