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    PaintedDiary JPiC Mentor

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    Valentine's Day Au Revoir



    Let me burn for you
    as bright as a Sunny Star
    my fusion ignites
    from passion bathed writes
    till midnight's Valentine's Day au revoir.


    Inspired by and for my friend Erik!!

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    this was very nice, on Valentines Day I'll tell ya its usually something I don't care about or is a little hard on me,

    the poem was great,
    I like the my fusion ignites from passion bathed writes,
    good,

    its like we're flirting or something lol

    I'm very touched by this,

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    Now, here's a Valentine! Great wordage, muse!


    Posted By Benny | Feb 15, 2007
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    Thank you so much Erik, and Benny. This was written for Erik. Erik wrote a beautiful poem called "Sunny Star", and my muse took over, and here is the result. Erik did not write "Sunny Star" for me, however, I claimed it, and absolutely loved it!!!! I saw so much of me in the poem, I asked him if I could have it. LOL,

    As sweet as Erik is, he said I could, and that was so precious of him. Of course it is his poem, but the fact that he said I could, meant a lot to me. The small things.....the small things. Love you Erik, and JPiC!!!

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