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    PaintedDiary JPiC Mentor

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    Vanishing

    Once was magic
    star dust is gone
    the trick now
    is your vanishing

    Where butterflies
    once fluttered
    now maggots
    in stomach

    Cupid’s arrow
    once tickled
    now pierces
    in heart

    Sweet songs
    once billowed
    now lies
    sing a serenade

    My heart
    once safe
    now a broken
    unicorn

    Glass shards
    menagerie pieces
    once beautiful
    now stab

    Words once
    like poetry
    no longer true
    now echoe forks

    Photographs
    once treasured
    now shadows
    of memories

    Please
    don’t reach
    let me leave
    for you are

    vanishing :knitting:

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    Mysty JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    Ooh Kim........ I know this one.. been there and done that..... and god it hurts ... I feel with You hon..... so much. Such a beautifully expressed write. *Hugs*

    ~Mysty~


    Posted By Mysty | Jul 21, 2007
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    PaintedDiary JPiC Mentor

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    Thanks Mysty for taking precious time to read and to comment. Yes, it is a hurtful thing, and I am sure many can relate. Thanks Mysty sooooo much for being the awesome person you are. We are blessed to have you here with us. Love Ya!

    {{{~~~***KIM***~~~}}} :)

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    I know this feeling well excellent penning Painted
    hugs kisses
    tom


    Posted By Bear | Jul 22, 2007
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    PaintedDiary JPiC Mentor

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    Thanks for stopping by Bear and for commenting. I appreciate it! Hugs.

    Kim :)

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    Exposed
    Broken hearts
    The jagged little shards
    Lying on the cold ground
    Gently I pick them up
    Wrapping them tightly in love’s handkerchief
    I slip them into my secret pocket
    Where I will keep them until the heart is whole again
    ©dp

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    This is awesome!!! Poof be gone comes to mind when I read that last line...I am so feeling this!
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    PaintedDiary JPiC Mentor

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    Dear Danette,

    This is simply beautiful and compliments Vanishing to the "T"! The words chosen and executed are flawless, and the form is aesthetic to the eyes. Message loud and clear. You are amazing! Thank you, and is our first collaboration, ;).

    Kim :p
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    PaintedDiary JPiC Mentor

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    I am so happy you enjoyed this and poof be gone is the perfect saying! Thank you so much for taking precious time to read, absorb, write, and comment. That is a compliment in itself. Thank you so much.

    Kim :)

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    PaintedDairy

    Lots of emotion here

    I like what you said here

    My heart
    once safe
    now a broken
    unicorn

    As a man, coming from a mans heart
    I feel every woman has a secret garden
    And this secret garden
    Is the nourishing of her soul


    Love You Paintedairy

    Art
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    PaintedDiary JPiC Mentor

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    Dear Art,

    Thank you for taking precious time to read and to comment. Yes, we do Art, and you expressed that beautifully. I love that response and thank you sooo much. Love you lots Art!

    PD :wub:
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    Very real emotions pull you into this one...do you read it now the same way you wrote it back then? I think not, and am sort of glad that things come and go in our lives...though sometimes the things we want to stay...don't, and the ones we want to go...don't.

    Still...beautifully expressed, as always...QueenPD!

    Nomad
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    PaintedDiary JPiC Mentor

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    Dear Ms Nomad,

    Yup, glad things come and go and transpire. Thank you for taking precious time to read and to comment, as I always look forward to your insightful commentary. I do seethings differently now, yes.

    PD :)
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    Dear Ms. Painted, Kim:
    I really wanted to stop here today and read a lovely poem of yours. I like your poem so much that, it truly hurts. Thank you for sharing your wonderful talents with us, sweet Kim!!
    Sincerely, Starry.:thanx::thanx:


    Posted By stardust | Sep 19, 2007
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    Thank you so much Ms Stardust for taking precious time to read and to comment. I am honored you like the poem and your comments are so uplifting and inspirational. Love Ya!

    Kim :)

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