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    Moonchild Moon Goddess of Whispers

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    ~VELVET BLOOM~

    Silky lip-locked
    maraschino kiss,
    below pale moon glow
    in sea-breeze kiss.

    Budding bosoms
    of flaming flesh.
    Skin to skin
    soft bodies mesh

    Virgin flowering
    in carnation croon,
    she opens herself
    in velvet bloom.

    Lascivious petals
    of throbbing pleasure
    firmly enfold
    her masculine treasure.

    Blooming rose in
    climax dawning.
    Deep desire
    intensely spawning.

    © 2003 Karen Davies


    Posted By Moonchild | Aug 23, 2007
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    erikestabrook JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    wonderful flow and word parring I liked this allot,
    it was very intense

    Moonchild Moon Goddess of Whispers

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    Thank you Erik for the wonderful comment.
    I'm glad you like it :curtsey:


    Posted By Moonchild | Aug 23, 2007
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    JolieH JPiC Contributor

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    Strong force of sexual energy. I love the images. Sweet cherries and the ocean breeze, Wow, sounds incredible.

    "Lascivious petals
    of throbbing pleasure
    firmly enfold
    her masculine treasure."

    This is my favorite, and if he looks anything like the picture, he truely is a treasure to be had.


    Posted By JolieH | Aug 23, 2007
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    PaintedDiary JPiC Mentor

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    LOVED LOVED LOVED THIS!!!!!! Going in my favorites now!!!!!!!!! Shew!!!!!! Loved the intricate weaving of words like imported lace.......wooohooooo!!!!!! You go Moonchild!!!

    Kim ;)

    Moonchild Moon Goddess of Whispers

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    Thanks so much Jolie.
    Yeah that guy in the picture is hot...lol
    Did you draw that red puppy with the cherries
    in your siggy? How cute and very good!


    Posted By Moonchild | Aug 24, 2007
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    Moonchild Moon Goddess of Whispers

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    Thanks a bunch Kim.
    Love your comment, I appreciate it :wub:


    Posted By Moonchild | Aug 24, 2007
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    PoetryInMotion PoetryInMotion

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    Moonchild

    I liked this best

    Virgin flowering
    in carnation croon,
    she opens herself
    in velvet bloom

    (Super!)

    Well said

    Art

    Moonchild Moon Goddess of Whispers

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    Thank you so much Art,
    I appreciate that :heart:


    Posted By Moonchild | Aug 25, 2007
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    JolieH JPiC Contributor

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    QUOTE
    "Did you draw that red puppy with the cherries
    in your siggy? How cute and very good!"

    Yes I did. I drew several for an internet, virtual dog breeding, game I use to be involoved in. This guy was one of my favorites.

    Thank You for the complement.


    Posted By JolieH | Aug 27, 2007
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    Moonchild Moon Goddess of Whispers

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    You're welcome Jolie...I just wuv him!


    Posted By Moonchild | Aug 27, 2007
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    Lustful poem that packs a punch and tastefully done...you can't get any better than this!

    Moonchild Moon Goddess of Whispers

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    Well thank you bunches PoetryGarden.
    It was nice of you to say that.
    I truly appreciate it:wub:


    Posted By Moonchild | Aug 28, 2007
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