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    Velvet voice

    Smooth comforting tone

    Eases stress, distress and all the rest

    Wordlessly I wait for

    Caressing verbs

    To escape sexual lips

    A vocal seduction

    Of my imaginative mind

    Leaves me

    Lingering on the edge

    Of a burning desire

    within

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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    Hi POETRY GARDEN - 1st thanx for sharing your poem! It's quite lovely play on words with nice metaphor. Especially the lines I quoted above. Very nice wording - And makes for an interesting read.

    Jacquii.


    Posted By MsJacquiiC | Jan 11, 2008
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    Thank you Jacquii...I will come back this afternoon to look at some of the wonderful poetry here!

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