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    JolieH JPiC Contributor

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    Vibrant Forest

    She ran in silver toe sandals
    into the forest, arms high – chin up,
    leaped stone to stone
    cross the moonlight lake
    spinning circles every third stone.
    Hands cupped on mouth forcing voice
    to ancient glimmer stone
    whose reflection glows
    through dark twisted vines.

    Through the massive archway
    of giant spiders in fossilized amber rocks
    A florescent moon, black lights on Eden.
    Pick a purple apple,
    crunch, crunch, crunch.
    Slay the serpent,
    sign the dagger,
    inhale zephyr forest spirit
    from steaming magenta pools.

    Silky mane on winged leopard steed,
    carousel sky trolley to deep forest.
    Bounce across a bongo bridge.
    Left foot back, two hops foreword
    double count, keep time
    spring up, high bounce.
    Ring a moon symbol.


    Posted By JolieH | Jul 29, 2007
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    KayaOtah happy as ever

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    Very detailed poem, makes the vibrant forest alive.
    *smiles*


    Posted By KayaOtah | Jul 29, 2007
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    Poetry Poetry

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    Irridescent

    I enjoyed it.


    Posted By Poetry | Jul 29, 2007
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    nomadicrhymer JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    Jolie, this is a magnificent display of forest life...brings out the vibrancy and stunning, vivid images to life...lovely poem. Thanks.

    Nomad
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    Dear Joile,

    :wow: Fantabulous Vibrant Forest! Magical, whimsical, alluring, vivid. Made me want to find one to hop on those glimmer stones and gaze upon those fossilized arachnids. Ooooo I am lovin this! Awesome, awesome, awesome! Stunning word selection and beautifully executed! An excellent rating!

    Kim :) :flyaway:

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