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    Waiting For the End (villanelle haiku collection alexandrine couplet)

    Waiting for the end
    As the time passes me by
    Death my only friend

    His ear I do bend
    Wishes from my mind now fly
    Waiting for the end

    No longer pretend
    Do not even want to try
    Death my only friend

    Heart that will not mend
    As slowly my feelings die
    Waiting for the end

    No payments to lend
    For a weakened soul to buy
    Death my only friend

    Give up my ghost, my spirit, to the grave I send
    Looking forward to being swept up to the sky
    Waiting for the end
    Death my only friend


    Posted By Checkmate | Jul 14, 2007
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    great poetry here,
    you can't ignore the power of those lines
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    Dear Scott,

    :wow: You have outdone yourself with this piece! I am speechless. Everything about this piece is of the highest caliber and executed flawlessly. Superb poem Scott! Just :wow:

    Kimberly :)

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    Showoff!What Kim said doubled!Great job my friend!


    Posted By Kit Carson | Jul 14, 2007
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    Hey! this is great...:robot:

    Although, I hope you're not in too big a hurry to spend time with your friend. LOL
    We enjoy reading your poems.


    Posted By JolieH | Jul 14, 2007
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    Thanks to all of you for the comments...glad that you enjoyed reading because i certainly enjoyed writing it.


    Posted By Checkmate | Jul 15, 2007
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