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    Bear JPiC Contributor

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    Waltzing in the Moonlight
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    Waltzing, slowly to rhythm
    Of gentle whispers of nature
    We danced in the ivory moonlight
    A soft breeze caressing our faces
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    Two hearts captured by love
    ~
    Stars sparkling in the black satin skies
    As if they were precious gemstones
    In the background waves, gently cascading
    On the white sandy beach
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    Two souls intertwined in romance
    ~
    As nature’s song continues to play
    They kissed a kiss of sensual passion
    While listening to soft whispers
    Of nature on a gentle breeze,
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    Two kindred spirits uniting
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    We’re holding each other tight
    wishing our love could last
    For an eternity and a day
    As we waltz in the ivory moonlight
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    Two lovers becoming one


    Posted By Bear | Aug 1, 2007
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    pretty imagery...sigh

    Bear JPiC Contributor

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    Thank you so much Danette for your wonderful comment I take by the sigh that you loved it lol or hoping someone waltzs with you in the moonlight
    hugs kisses
    bear


    Posted By Bear | Aug 2, 2007
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    nomadicrhymer JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    Bear this was SO lovely....the canvass you carefully spread under the moonlight, then paint with strong, sweet, loving strokes lends itself to a picture of everlasting and enduring love...my favorite...dancing! :yay:

    love it!

    Nomad

    KayaOtah happy as ever

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    Feel like watching a romantic movie scene where the streets are quite and only the couple are dancing there. Just hope that Mr. Been wont fall on them...
    *smiles*


    Posted By KayaOtah | Aug 2, 2007
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    Bear,

    I like what ya got goin' on here - it sounds like the perfect evening, the perfect setting.....

    It's a keeper, nice write....


    Posted By lasher | Aug 2, 2007
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    Bear JPiC Contributor

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    Therese
    Thank you so very very much for your great comment and for taking precious time to read my poem.
    hugs kisses
    bear
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    Kaya
    Thank you for your fantastic comment and for taking time to read my works
    handshakes
    bear
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    Lasher
    Thank you for taking time to read my poems and for the great comment
    handshakes
    bear


    Posted By Bear | Aug 2, 2007
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