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    PoetryInMotion PoetryInMotion

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    Inspired by MYSTY's poem: http://jpicforum.info/emotional-romantic/summer-love-4010.html



    "Wanting To Be Close"

    I dance with the lace
    Of
    Your white cotton dress
    ~
    Your emotions sway
    Into the summer breeze
    ~
    You fill the air
    With a smile
    that radiates
    Up off your beautiful
    Face
    ~
    The gentle kiss
    Of a warm embrace
    A touch of ones spirit
    Along with a memory
    ~
    a longing to be close
    To the one you Love!

    (((Hugs))) to you Misty

    Always loving You

    Art

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    Mysty JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    WoW :giftrose: from the Inspirerer to the Inspireree Thank You Art. Your words do truly live up to your name. :)

    Love Mysty


    Posted By Mysty | Aug 21, 2007
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    PaintedDiary JPiC Mentor

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    Dear Art,

    Very lovely, and so is Ms Mysty. Beautiful to see her inspire those beautiful words as she and you are an inspiration to us all.

    PD :wub:

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    I enjoyed the lovely details you chose to frame the sentiment in this poem. It's very delicate and shows tenderness on your part.


    Posted By JolieH | Aug 22, 2007
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    lasher Member

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    Hey now PIM,

    Yes, details... I get good visuals from this... I'm likin' this too, it's got grace and flow....
    Nice....


    Posted By lasher | Aug 22, 2007
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    nomadicrhymer JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    Art you always open BIG!

    I dance with the lace
    Of
    Your white cotton dress
    ~
    Your emotions sway
    Into the summer breeze


    you softly blow romance into the ear of beauty, merging the two into indelible inks of LOVE!!

    Awesome....again! I'm scared a you!!

    Nomad

    PoetryInMotion PoetryInMotion

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    Mysty...lol

    My dear I fell in love with you from day one, you are the flip side of the coin of my Romanticism you are the growth that draws water from the rain.

    I would love one day to collaborate a romantic poem with you.

    ((Hugs)) to you and always Loving You!

    Art

    PoetryInMotion PoetryInMotion

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    Paintedairy, Thank You so much for your kind words. Yes Mysty is a very talented writer and I am continually in awe of her romanticism.

    I'm happy to be here, There is much talent


    ((hugs to you))

    Also loving you!

    Art
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    Mysty JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    Can we work together labor day weekend? I have a 3 day weekend so will be online lots. I would be honored to collaborate with You Arthur. :)


    Posted By Mysty | Aug 25, 2007
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    PoetryInMotion PoetryInMotion

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    Jolie...Thank You for such kind words, Mysty's poem was the root of where this one came from.

    Love You!

    Art

    PoetryInMotion PoetryInMotion

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    Lasher, My friend. It all comes from the heart
    And it takes the beauty of a womans "Secret Garden"
    To stir emotions within this ones soul to write a poem like this.

    Thank You for your comment

    Art

    PoetryInMotion PoetryInMotion

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    you softly blow romance into the ear of beauty, merging the two into indelible inks of LOVE!!

    Awesome....again! I'm scared a you!!

    Nomad
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    Nomad...lol no need to be scared.
    I'm rough on the edges and very gentle at heart

    you softly blow romance into the ear of beauty

    This line is superb!

    Thank You For such a nice comment.

    Love You Much!

    Art (Don't Be Scared!)

    PoetryInMotion PoetryInMotion

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    you softly blow romance into the ear of beauty, merging the two into indelible inks of LOVE!!

    Awesome....again! I'm scared a you!!

    Nomad


    Nomad...Thank You so much for this kind comment.

    you softly blow romance into the ear of beauty

    This is a GREAT! line (Superb!)

    LoL...Please don't be scared, I'm very gentle at heart.

    Always Loving You!

    Art

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