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    Sally Roberts Forestdawn

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    Watching the ebb
    Alone by the sea,
    Inhaling the deep
    Ocean breezes.
    Heavy spurts
    Of splendor spray
    Tingle my taste buds with salt.

    Waves of excitement
    Splash over my body
    Then softly cascade
    ever downward.
    Beginning and ending
    In a rich sea of foam,
    I will forever be
    Watching the ebb.


    Blessed be
    Sally

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    Totally my favorite by you! VERY well done!:huggles: :soapbox: :whistle3: :bootyshake:


    Posted By lanaia74 | Jan 16, 2007
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    Benny New Member

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    Love the ocean...and its endless ebb...great reflection here, Sally...loved this one!


    Posted By Benny | Jan 20, 2007
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    Sally Roberts Forestdawn

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    My humblest of thanks Ianaia and Benny:

    I'm a rhymster at heart and don't have too many poems that are free verse but I like to challenge myself on ALL types of poetry so I can get better at writing.
    Thanks so much for your comments.

    Blessings
    Sally

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    beautiful imagery....nice rhythm...i love the sound of this piece...it's very soothing.
    great write.


    Posted By dazamaru | Jan 22, 2007
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    Dear Ms Roberts......I LOVE THE OCEAN!!!! This was a beautiful painting, with a cool zephyr, and sea foam green images...exquisite, simple divine, the rhythmic quality ebbed & flowed like the poem. LOVED IT and going straight into my favorites!!!!:yay: :bravo:

    {{~~**Painted**~~}}

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