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    erikestabrook JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    What does one say when all is crumbling before their eyes?
    perhaps a few last words,

    to pertrude through the tunnel of the afterlife unheard,
    maybe that is the afterlife for some?

    I now have a purpose and a vision in my head,
    while I still kick and scream its my duty to deliver this message,

    Why can't we go back as far as we can,
    when we we're the underdogs?

    two legs kicking in a land of danger,
    We we're so much more interesting then , I imagine,

    We had to make bone weapons, and actually communicate,
    We had to scrap, run, mate or be ate,

    let's be honest, we we're never meant to run things,
    These runty little mammals with no real size or strength,

    All you have to do is look how we've messed up this planet to realize,
    We belong in caves.

    by Erik Estabrook
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    So true, so true. This poem will set people thinking. It says it like it is. I liked this one Erik. good work.


    Posted By Forestdawn | Jul 2, 2015
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