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Discussion in 'Spoken Word & Freestyle' started by Abae, Feb 16, 2007.



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    The best place for
    me to be, is in your
    arms.

    Both of us on a
    warm beach laying
    in the heat of the
    days sun.

    Waiting for the
    feeling of the wet
    cool waves.

    As the nights
    wildness, comes in
    with a run.


    Posted By Abae | Feb 16, 2007
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    Dear Abae,

    :wow: When you come, you come strong!!! hmmmmmmm I loved this, as we all know I am a lover of the short and poignant!! Thank you for this as you leave me pondering exactly what does one do with "nights wildness"? ;) Part 2 perhaps? LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Looking forward to more. Love Ya' Abae!!!!!! ;):bravo:

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    Lovely :D


    Posted By ¤Me¤ | Feb 16, 2007
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    Kim.... you sure do encourage us all:


    a part 2 Hmmmmm????

    Thanks for your great review.


    Posted By Abae | Feb 17, 2007
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    Me,

    Thanks for your complimentary word and Grin. LOL.


    Posted By Abae | Feb 17, 2007
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    Hehe :p


    Posted By ¤Me¤ | Feb 17, 2007
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    :D :girlhide:


    Posted By Abae | Feb 21, 2007
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    Abae, this one is beautifully scribed! Laying on the beach on a warm day is officially the BEST way to spend your day, especially with someone in your arms! Double Dutch Fudge and warm Caramel yummy!!
    :beach:
    The best part though, is watching the moon rise and create a silvery canvas on the previously fire-tipped waves...if I were you I'd watch that "wildness" tho....overheating here...LOL!

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    Therese,

    Thanks for your nice
    and amusing review.


    Posted By Abae | Apr 2, 2008
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    the best part is watching the moon,
    inviting her to dance and stroking her thighs,
    kissing the tears that run down her cheeks,
    saying "welcome" the whole while
    and smiling when she nods head
    and accepting her "I'm sorry"

    Jacquii.


    Posted By MsJacquiiC | Apr 3, 2008
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    B]MsJacquii....,

    Oh........ you are a
    smooth operator.

    Excepting her words
    that way, while you
    dance her about in
    the moon light

    Thanks for the review.[/B]


    Posted By Abae | Apr 4, 2008
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    Ha! sometimes I can be overtly sentimental, yes! Anyway - a lovely write actually - but If I may ask so kindly... Please update your email address to current.

    Jacquii.


    Posted By MsJacquiiC | Apr 4, 2008
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    Did it another
    three time
    since being on
    here now.


    Posted By Abae | Apr 4, 2008
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