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Discussion in 'Emotional Romantic' started by ¤Me¤, Dec 11, 2006.



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    What if I, was a star in the sky,
    And you were the sun,
    There was no moon,
    The night hadn't begun,
    I was alone, and you wonder why,
    I was there, but to run, believe it, I tried.

    If I said I love you,
    If I wanted to be next to you,
    If I said I need you,
    What would you happen to do?

    What if I, don't want to forget,
    If I don't want anyone else than you,
    If I'd see you and blush,
    Believe me, it's true,
    I don't want to forget you.

    What if the world, was only sea,
    With an island, with only you and me,
    Would you make me see,
    How the world is beautiful?

    If I said all I want is you,
    If I said I need to be with you,
    If I told you how much I love you,
    What would you happen to do?

    Untill then, for eternity I will wander...


    Posted By ¤Me¤ | Dec 11, 2006
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    erikestabrook JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    cute kinda poem which packed insight in delicately

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    Me,
    you have a great concept of life and love for one of such a tender age and you have the ability to express it. Continue to grow in your ability and nurture your mind as you do. I enjoyed your poem very much.
    Ron


    Posted By ronbliss | Dec 14, 2006
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