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Discussion in 'Emotional Romantic' started by athlone, Mar 1, 2008.



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    To feel that I am less than whole
    when I am without you.
    And far more than I ever dreamt I could be
    when I am with you.

    To love your body more than
    I could ever love my own
    and feel your emotion in my soul.
    To let my joy soothe your sadness
    and your smile make my spirit soar.

    It is knowing that you feel
    how much I love you
    and need my love as much as I need yours.
    To want you for ever
    and to feel both safe in your love
    and ever mindful of showing you mine.


    Posted By athlone | Mar 1, 2008
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    such a beautiful love poem athlone...get's all misty-eyed...

    lovely!


    Posted By solo | Mar 2, 2008
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    I can say that I honestly relate to this piece. My husband is in the military and I feel like nothing without him. He's overseas right now and I'm no one without him. Great piece!

    ~Holly

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