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    mangodroplet Blue Mango Puppy :]

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    What is the point of what you say
    When all you say is washed away?

    What is the point of what you think
    When all you think is down the sink?

    What is the point of all your smiles
    When all your smiles burn on the piles?

    What is the point of all your tears
    When all your tears build up your fears?

    What is the point of all your sighs
    When all your sighs give you goodbyes?

    What is the point of giving light
    When all your light takes off in flight?

    What is the point of faking life
    When all you feel is lifelong strife?


    i need answers...
    and what's your favorite line..? It'll help me cheer up :]

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    Dear Ms Mango,

    I love the structure of this piece and one can feel the emotion just pouring. A different flavor to our poetic rainbow. My favorite line is---->
    "What is the point of all your tears
    When all your tears build up your fears?
    ......so profound. The poem demands answers, and it captured my attention from beginning to end. The title set the tone of the piece, and the content was executed excellently Ms Mango. You are advanced in many arenas, and the writing arena has captured our hearts. Along with your unmatched love, caring, and enthusiasm displayed on JPiC. All of those qualities, and more are intricately woven into the canvas' you have shared on this Forum. We are lucky to have crossed paths with such an extraordinary young lady.

    {{{~~**KIM***~~}}}:)

    mangodroplet Blue Mango Puppy :]

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    Thanks Kim...You're cheered me up some more :]

    I love the people on JPiC..they're amazing, and they've been the bright point for me nowadays....

    I'm glad I'm making a difference somewhere..haha.

    thanks for reading...

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    Anna...beautiful work here! It has been a few days since I've been able to spend time in here to read...I am glad I finally got to read. Deep questions...life seems to provide the anwers. Sadness creeps up on us now and then...enough terrible things happening in our world...but, notice there is always the sun rising in the east to begin a new day. This poem is very good and to the point. I love it, fruit puppy.


    Posted By Benny | Mar 1, 2007
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    mangodroplet Blue Mango Puppy :]

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    THanks fruit daddy...

    haha funnyness

    you were like, I admire how you're always happy :D

    your dancing chicken makes me smile...:]
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    Simplistic and beautifully written...hope you're feeling a little better! :girlhide:

    ...but I couldn't resist!

    What is the point of what you say
    When all you say is washed away?

    when what you say has blessed my soul
    I'll listen until you're wrinkled and old


    What is the point of what you think
    When all you think is down the sink?


    when what you think is preserved on paper
    it swaths a path for those coming later


    What is the point of all your smiles
    When all your smiles burn on the piles?


    when a smile like yours lights up the room
    nevermore will there be gloom


    What is the point of all your tears
    When all your tears build up your fears?


    when you feel sad cause we're apart
    the tears you cry will heal your heart

    What is the point of all your sighs
    When all your sighs give you goodbyes?


    a sigh's a moment for God, a thought
    to put new light within your heart


    What is the point of giving light
    When all your light takes off in flight?

    when light comes warmly from your candle
    there's nothing on earth we cannot handle


    What is the point of faking life
    When all you feel is lifelong strife?

    when the life we fake brightens it for others
    it's worth seeing happy smiles from our mothers


    life is fragile, blessed and short
    why put the horse before the cart?
    fill each day with pearls of wisdom
    to learn at least ONE thing to take to God's kingdom



    Nomad (your gypsy mama)



    mangodroplet Blue Mango Puppy :]

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    AHH!!!

    :yay:

    You're amazing, my gypsy momma :]

    This line made me happy:
    when what you think is preserved on paper
    it swaths a path for those coming later


    :]

    the future, the past, the present...


    AHH!!! You've made me feel like one of the most important people today :] all because you took the time...

    You can't buy time with money..but you can earn money with time :]

    Time is the most blessed thing...thanks for your love :]

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