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Discussion in 'Creative Traditional' started by lanaia74, Nov 10, 2006.



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    All the riches, fame, and glory could be mine
    Never to worry over trivial things again
    He can make my life luxurious and fine
    Just be his alone putting him above all other men.

    Should I question his ways as they are eccentric and strange?
    Should I say something about the evil look in his eyes?
    I don't want him to think I'm stepping out of range
    Hoping he won't be offended by my whys.

    Posses me own me I feel he wants to do
    At times he is so possessive and over Bering
    But there are the times he is so sweet too
    I figure it is his way of showing his caring.

    Should I submit to him on his terms?
    Him trying to rule my very existence?
    At times the way he looks at me makes me squirm
    Wouldn't that make our relationship tense?

    Submit to me child mind, body, and SOUL
    I can certainly make your life happy and gay
    Beyond time and space away from life's tragic knoll
    Submit to me your soul away from me would never stray.


    Posted By lanaia74 | Nov 10, 2006
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