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    When dawn breaks
    Scattering the darkness of our room
    And a new day's light touches your face,
    I look at you,
    Peaceful,
    Sleeping,
    And I thank God for allowing us to walk through this life
    As man and wife.

    Though after so many years of sharing
    I do not completely understand you;
    Your soul,
    Your inner being
    Must be beautiful as so much gentleness,
    Warmth and kindness
    Radiates from you.

    Many times I find it disturbing
    That you are unable
    To verbally express your love to me,
    But then
    It is only my own selfishness that creates this conflict.
    You show your love to me
    Many times over
    In the way that you constantly pamper me.

    Regardless of the changing circumstances
    With each new day,
    Your love seems always there
    Stronger than yesterday,
    Less than tomorrow.
    I thought I always knew love
    But realize now that before I met you I had none.
    You taught me love.

    To say, "I love you"
    Does not do justice to what I feel.
    My love for you is unspeakable,
    It is feeling that has no adequate words to describe it.
    You fill me with more love
    Than you will ever know.

    When each day is over
    And in the darkness of our room we lay
    Tired,
    In our bed.
    I touch your hair, your cheek,
    I feel the warmth of not just a body,
    But of a soul.
    I close my eyes to the world
    And I thank God for allowing us to walk through this life
    As man and wife.


    Posted By ronbliss | Jan 12, 2007
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    :drunk2: :elephant: Wow! Such emotion! VERY well done!


    Posted By lanaia74 | Jan 13, 2007
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    ronbliss JPiC Contributor

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    Thank you very much. this was written for my wife on the occasion of our seventeenth anniversary. That was thirty years ago. Ron


    Posted By ronbliss | Jan 13, 2007
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    Dear Ron,

    :wow::wow: Sometimes that is all I can say, when I am filled with the emotion that radiated from this poem. Classic!!!!!!! Beautiful!!!! Just :wow: Ron. Thank you for sharing this!!! :bravo:

    {{~~**Kimberly**~~}}

    ronbliss JPiC Contributor

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    Kim,
    You are always so very nice in your words. Just another page from my diary, painted many years ago. Thank you ever so much.
    Ron


    Posted By ronbliss | Jan 13, 2007
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    such beautiful sentiments...a fine write...


    Posted By dazamaru | Jan 16, 2007
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    ronbliss JPiC Contributor

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    Thank you dazamaru....... for reading and for commenting on my words. I appreciate it very much.
    Ron Bliss


    Posted By ronbliss | Jan 16, 2007
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    Dear Ron: WOW!! I was left speechless at your marvelous work of Art, your Poem. I love the title: "When dawn breaks." I also love all the words throughout your poem. It speaks itself, the way you feel towards your love for your wife. It is great to feel that kind of love for each other. God bless you, Ron and your wife!! Thank you for sharing it in this friendly Forum for Writers!! Regards. Sincerely, Stardust.:sign_thanks:


    Posted By stardust | Jan 24, 2007
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    ronbliss JPiC Contributor

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    Stardust,
    I am pleased that you like it. I would rather be writing of love in all stages, steadfast, past, separated, whatever, than any other topic. That is what I am most comfortable with. Again, thank you.
    Ron


    Posted By ronbliss | Jan 24, 2007
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