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Discussion in 'Emotional Romantic' started by sage, Dec 8, 2006.



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    I lay in the impression your body once
    made in our bed, wondering how long the
    pillow will remain warm.

    Silence only makes me hear you more,
    the dark weight of the hours drag behind
    me as I pray to an altar built on the edge
    of my despair.

    Like a mad woman staring into her secrets,
    I reach for you through the shadows
    wondering how long I will remain a hope junkie.

    The slam of the door doesn’t abate my
    hunger for you, the veil of your lips made
    silent as my weariness follows the infinite
    ache of alone.

    Living becomes a stranger as I cling to
    remembering what day it used to be,
    your body a river I still yearn to drink.

    Turning a deaf ear one last time,
    you left administering the
    lash, and I ended up eating the bitter bread
    of banishment.

    sage ©


    Posted By sage | Dec 8, 2006
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    Harry New Member

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    well-done:bravo:

    you have much talent:cheers:


    Posted By Harry | Dec 8, 2006
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    Dear Sage,

    Simply exquisite! I love everything about this poem. Beautiful visuals, beautiful picture, beautifully executed, and beautiful selection of words. One could "feel" your poem, and that is beautiful in itself! Wow!!! I am in awe of your talent. I look forward to reading more of your works!! Thank you for sharing! The muse of the written word has blessed you with lyrical wings.

    Painted ;)

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    thank you harry, it is so nice to meet you!

    write on,
    sage


    Posted By sage | Dec 8, 2006
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    sage New Member

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    Thank you painted, your comments mean so much! I look forward to perusing your work as well.

    write on,
    sage


    Posted By sage | Dec 8, 2006
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    wonderful write, so visually scribed, this is an absolute treasure:goodpost:


    Posted By Echoes | Dec 8, 2006
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    thank you so much echoes; it is nice to meet you!:sign_thanks:


    Posted By sage | Dec 8, 2006
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