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    Intricate soul intricate soul

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    This wish I’d grant you
    If it were mine to give,
    Along with the choice of freedom
    In my heart to dwell, to live.

    Together we would stand
    In love we may fall
    It should be true
    If nothing at all.

    If it is right,
    If it is craved just enough
    Your prince would rescue you
    And brave the alligators’ trough.

    I’d help you onto my stallion
    As I hold the reins steady.
    Then into the sunset we’d both ride
    As soon as you were ready.

    mangodroplet Blue Mango Puppy :]

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    WAHHH!
    I say bravo!
    *huggles*
    Yes...i can see how it is a reply to my poem... :]
    I love it....lucky woman who finally figures out how amazing you are :]
    yay!
    favorite:
    Together we would stand
    In love we may fall
    It should be true
    If nothing at all.


    Great!

    Jer4clarity Lover of Meanings

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    IS,

    Ah! A Knight in Shinning Armour Poem! Great job! My Fav:

    Jerry

    KayaOtah happy as ever

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    A great poem!! I love the first 2 stanza, my fav lines are:

    Together we would stand
    In love we may fall

    Your prince would rescue you
    And brave the alligators’ trough.

    Nice write!! Excellent !!


    Posted By KayaOtah | Aug 13, 2007
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