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    Intricate soul intricate soul

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    This wish I’d grant you
    If it were mine to give,
    Along with the choice of freedom
    In my heart to dwell, to live.

    Together we would stand
    In love we may fall
    It should be true
    If nothing at all.

    If it is right,
    If it is craved just enough
    Your prince would rescue you
    And brave the alligators’ trough.

    I’d help you onto my stallion
    As I hold the reins steady.
    Then into the sunset we’d both ride
    As soon as you were ready.
    The End

    JolieH JPiC Contributor

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    Aw,
    This is so cute. I love fairy tales. I've been waiting for Prince charming a very long time. I think my Prince got ate by wolves or at least chased off, but In the forest of my soul, I will always return in dreams, like Sleeping Beauty, where I first believed he would rescue me one day. But if it came true, and he kissed me wake there would be little significance because then it wouldn't be a dream anymore. I prefer Never Never Land.
    Although , - LOL I wouldn't chase him off.


    Posted By JolieH | Oct 29, 2007
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    this is really nice. it's like a good bard song. very short and sweet with a nice touch. nicely done.

    zaac


    Posted By zaac | Oct 29, 2007
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    Intricate soul intricate soul

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    thanks

    JolieH thanks for reading Really appreciate it. and jolie, I so do prefer never never land; you still have to grow up in fairy tales, but never neverland you stay eternally young ha ha.

    And Zaac was reading your "I Do Remember Well"...man that is awesome~did i tell you that b 4?
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    nomadicrhymer JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    Nick...glad to see you back in action!! Sorry I missed you this morning...

    This IS a very gently bred piece, full of stars and dreams of pure love...and I am loving it! Very, very nice!! :yay:

    Nomad
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    How lovely...... if only such fairytales were real. This is very soft and delightful. Thank You for a good read.

    Mysty


    Posted By Mysty | Oct 31, 2007
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