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    lanaia74 New Member

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    What is this small thing I am waking up in?
    Everything smells musty, and the feel of the air is damp
    It seems I'm in a predicament that I will never win
    This seems like some sort of a small box,but there seems to be a light resembling a small light.
    This place is so small that I can hardly move
    Chlostrophia helps matters none
    To get out of here what on earth do I have to prove?
    I want to get out of here and again on my face feel the sun.
    There is some sort of power source because I can still breath the air
    So it seems my captor wants to keep me alive
    I should have never trusted that good-looking guy, the one that was blond and so fair
    He paid attention to me, and I went with him for a drive.
    You violated my rights no matter what you might say
    He had been stalking me for weeks and knows my family has money
    I thought you were so nice, but your sick game I don't want to play
    Trusting you was my down fall, I had no feelings at the time I should flee.
    If I live through this I will make sure you get caught
    You have no right to hold me against my will
    I will make sue by the authorities you are sought
    I will try my best to make sure my life you do not steal.


    Posted By lanaia74 | Dec 13, 2006
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    Benny New Member

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    Frightening thought here...I am certain these were the last thoughts of too many. Interesting work, lania...I liked this very much.


    Posted By Benny | Dec 13, 2006
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