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Discussion in 'Spoken Word & Freestyle' started by lanaia74, Jan 21, 2007.



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    The hot desert wind blows so hard I think I'm in a sand storm
    The blinding sand is so thick I can't see in front of myself
    The fierce wind blows my body against something not of the norm
    I must have sprang a trap door as I try to get hold of myself.

    I am falling from a small opening into a large huge room
    As I get to my feet, I must figure out some way to have light
    I feel around and find a stick, using my shirt, I wrap it around the stick, I now have fire to see the room
    My eyes grow wide because of what I see from the illumination so bright.

    It seems I have stumbled into an ancient Egyptian place
    This room seems not to have been touched by man for thousands of years
    To me everything seems to be in tact, everything still in it's rightful place
    All the immense wealth here I have no fears.

    All the beauty here that has been undisturbed for all these years
    The immense wealth here evidentially came from an ancient dynasty
    I have never seen such wealth in all my years
    I think I hear voices coming from this ancient place.

    It's like the ancients are begging me not to tell
    Of a secret hidden here for many many decades
    I will keep the secret of this place where the ancients dwell
    But in my memory this place will never fade.


    Posted By lanaia74 | Jan 21, 2007
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    Benny New Member

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    Expressive work! Love this very much and thank you for posting your story poems here!


    Posted By Benny | Jan 23, 2007
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    Yes it is wonderous
    to find what others
    have not.

    Then to hold it.. and
    to feel it as if it's apart
    of you.

    To know it intimately
    and secretly..

    Always.

    Ah.... nice work. It
    just feeds the mind.

    Thanks for the read.


    Posted By Jeez | Jan 26, 2007
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    Dear Lanaia,

    Very nice yes. Tis like holding a crystal ball....only you know the right words to reveal such a majestic and powerful world. Thank you for another Masterpiece.

    {{~~**Painted**~~}}

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