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Discussion in 'Emotional Romantic' started by Bear, Jan 3, 2008.



    Bear JPiC Contributor

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    Whispered

    I caress her heart and envision her dreams
    Whispering in her ear softly
    Sharing with her all that I am.
    My warm soul she penetrates
    She’s embraced by my heart
    Gentle is her dream
    My mind she’s employed
    What she sees
    is hers,
    Me.


    Posted By Bear | Jan 3, 2008
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    mangodroplet Blue Mango Puppy :]

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    wonderfully shaped :]

    beautiful words :]

    i love how it comes smaller and smaller...

    thanks for it!

    :wub: Mango

    Bear JPiC Contributor

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    Thank you so much my sweet little one I am so happy that you enjoy reading my love and romance poems Mango. you are so cute my sweetest little one
    hugs kisses
    bear
    {{{{{{{{ MANGO }}}}}}}}}} HUGGLES


    Posted By Bear | Jan 4, 2008
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    Poignant ending - The "Me" is like a resounding declaration of sorts. What form is this? It looks like a syllabic shape-type form. Not necessarily a romantic type poem - but the sensuality within is very nice. I think your poem is more on the "love" tip than romanticism - It's quite nice though. I like it - It makes for a lovely read.

    Thanx for the sharing ;)

    Jacquii.


    Posted By MsJacquiiC | Jan 11, 2008
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    Bear JPiC Contributor

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    Thank you Jacquii for your great comment
    hugs kisses
    bear


    Posted By Bear | Jan 11, 2008
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    JolieH JPiC Contributor

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    Beautiful Bear,

    You have such sweet words to share.


    Posted By JolieH | Jan 15, 2008
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    Bear JPiC Contributor

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    Thank you so much my sweet Jolie
    hugs kisses
    bear


    Posted By Bear | Jan 16, 2008
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    nomadicrhymer JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    Bear, this is a very heart-warming piece - almost like a homage paid to the love of your life...very nice!

    Nomad

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    Awww.... that was pretty. Very touching.


    Posted By Hestoria | Jan 20, 2008
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    crazymamma5 angelic mamma

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    nice and lovely. that was a sweet poem for a special someone.

    Bear JPiC Contributor

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    thank you Nomad
    hugs kisses
    bear

    thank you Hestoria
    hugs kisses
    bear

    thank you crazymomma
    hugs kisses
    bear


    Posted By Bear | Jan 21, 2008
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