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Discussion in 'Emotional Romantic' started by Bear, Apr 19, 2008.



    Bear JPiC Contributor

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    Whispers of Love

    In the isolated darkness of her bed
    His husky whisper echoes in her soul
    Filling her with an intense desire
    For his fervent delicate touch.

    His whisper tells of a long sultry night
    Filled with sweltering fiery passion
    Lovers becoming one in soul
    Achieving heights beyond the cosmos

    Lovers entwined in needs, wants, hopes and dreams
    My hot hard body atop her
    Her body opening to mine
    Deep within her hot wetness.

    Fires surges though our veins
    Grunting and moaning endlessly
    Collapsing into each other's arms
    Holding each other's trembling bodies.

    Drifting into a exquisite sated slumber as one
    Waking in the magnificent morning light
    And softly kissing in the quiet
    Gentle breeze of the dawning day.


    Posted By Bear | Apr 19, 2008
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    PaintedDiary JPiC Mentor

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    Omg Bear and all I have is a turtle...lol....wonderful poem Bear. Sweet, sultry, sensual, and just enough spice! Love it!

    Kim :wub:

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    Thank you so much Painted you are great love ya sweetie
    hugs kisses
    bear


    Posted By Bear | Apr 19, 2008
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    Is it getting hot in here or is it just me? The more I read, the more I wanted to read! Fantastic! It's everything Kim says it is and more! Honey, if I weren't happily married, I'd be moving to your state, lol.

    Talk about sweet nothings! Ok, gotta cool down here, lol.

    I have a couple of suggestions...

    I love to read your work, it's always fantastic!
    hugs,
    Gail

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    Thank you so very much for your fantastic comment and for your suggestions I have fixed those points you pointed out thank you
    hugs kisses
    bear


    Posted By Bear | Apr 19, 2008
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