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Discussion in 'Miscellaneous' started by mysticpoet729, May 5, 2008.



    mysticpoet729 The "Mystic" Poet

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    Who am I


    I'm the one you tease,
    Cause I'm different.
    I'm the one you bother,
    Cause I'm just there.
    I'm the mat you step on.
    I'm the rock you kick around.
    And you think you can control me.
    Like i'm the clay and you're the sculptor.
    Like I'm the robot and you press my buttons.
    But you can't control me.
    I may be nothing as you say.
    But your words don't mean jack to me.
    I am somebody.
    Sooner or later you'll see me on the street.
    With my head up high,
    While you're eating my dust.
    And I'll be wondering,
    Who's laughing now!

    Flookyyy Flookyyy

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    I love this! And I'm sure a lot of people can relate to it.
    Good job.

    xo


    Posted By Flookyyy | May 6, 2008
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    deep_poet86 Endless Rewind

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    Very nice, I can relate to that in some ways... When I was a kid/teen didn't have many friends was made fun of and stuff, got beat up a few times. I also have a poem called Who Am I that I wrote a long time ago but mine is about a kid trying to be cool, or thinks they are being cool.

    Good work though, I enjoyed it much so
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