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    ronbliss JPiC Contributor

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    Why do I love you?

    With much inadequacy of expression, I love you,
    Because you are a being, more beautiful
    Than words can describe, Or artist can portray.

    I love you,
    Because our creator has given you a pure heart,
    And a cleansed soul, And has chosen you
    To lead me Each day of my life.

    I love you,
    For the deep satisfaction I derive from our relationship,
    As you tirelessly pamper me With your affection.

    Because your love Looks beyond my weakness and faults,
    Accepting me As I am,
    Forgiving me for what I have been,
    Walking with me for today,
    Strengthening me for tomorrow,
    Loving me forever,

    I love you,
    Because you have shown me love,
    You taught it to me in my ignorance,
    But most of all, I love you,
    Because you first loved me.


    Posted By ronbliss | Mar 31, 2007
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    Curtis Spider Lee Curtis Spider Lee

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    When our heart finally find real Love, we can truely say we have found much more than a friend. Wonderful write Ron!

    ronbliss JPiC Contributor

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    Curtis,
    Thank you for reading and responding to "Why Do I Love You?" This one was written for my wife of 47 years. again, thanks.
    Ron
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    Posted By ronbliss | Apr 5, 2007
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    mistyllspoetry Billy Corgan's Shadow

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    A sweet love poem
    expressed from your heart.
    Love is the gift.
    Sounds like you have good
    love. Great! God sends us
    the one he wants us to
    be with.

    ronbliss JPiC Contributor

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    Misty,

    You are very kind, thank you for reading this poem and for telling me your thoughts.

    Ron


    Posted By ronbliss | Apr 5, 2007
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    Dear Ron,

    :wow: This was so beautiful. I find myself using that word frequently in responding to your work. Ron, you do write some of the most BEAUTIFUL poems, I have ever read. The love you and your wife have is genuine. The stanzas that I quoted are phenomenal, and I am in awe of your words. The way you scribe about her, and the love is amazing and eloquent. She is one blessed lady, and you are one blessed gentleman. Finding such equilibrium, balance, and having our faith seems to be the glue in most lasting loving relationships. This was the first I read today on Easter, and truly has set my heart for the day. I love this poem Ron. I envisioned this piece done in Calligraphy on Old English Parchment paper, with an exquisite intricate frame. Thank you for making my heart sing!!!!:bravo: God Bless Ron.

    {{{~~**PD**~~}}}:)

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    Oh PaintedDiary,
    After those remarks, I am speechless. Really I am, Went to early service, came home and I turned on my computer as my wife is preparing Easter Dinner for all of the family intent on checking my eamails and wow, four from yesterday and another from today from you. A true Easter blessing that is incomprehensible. As you know, this is a page I painted in my diary. This is an older page and yet in a relationship it seems timeless. I don't know if love for one exist in eternity but if it does, this page will be ever as timeless then as it is today. Thank you for your comments, your friendship and for reading this.
    Ron


    Posted By ronbliss | Apr 8, 2007
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