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    Bear JPiC Contributor

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    Wild-Flower Fields
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    Vibrant, beautiful coloring,
    Fascinating shapes, sizes in a wide assortment,
    Their seductive fragrances gently meander,
    Through the forests, prairies, rivers and lakes.
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    Drawing men and women from far away lands,
    To the wild-flowers beauty and fragrance,
    Giving them a deep felt need to love.
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    A soothing, tranquil peacefulness,
    Surrounds these beautiful plants and flowers
    in the forests, prairies, rivers and lakes,
    When relaxing in a field of wild-flowers,
    Their souls are filled with love, happiness,
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    Their hearts are comforted by the tranquil sounds,
    Of nature, by the warmth of the beautiful afternoon sun,
    As they reminisce of childhood days.
    When everything seemed simpler, and carefree.


    Posted By Bear | Apr 20, 2007
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    Sally Roberts Forestdawn

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    Greetings Bear:

    I absolutely LOVE your poem "Wild-Flower Fields"

    I can sum it all up in just one word: MASTERPIECE!
    Mother Natures finest.
    I love flowers and this was a well written poem for sure. I took me mentally back to a place I always go to feel warm and complete.
    Thanks for sharing.
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    Greetings Bear:

    I absolutely LOVE your poem

    Bear JPiC Contributor

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    Sally

    Thank you so very much for your wonderful comment I always try to make my poems visual so that the reader can go back and be in that special place to them.
    hugs kisses
    tom


    Posted By Bear | Apr 22, 2007
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    This is quite beautiful actually - very carefree, relaxing and enraptured in an ambiance of sweet surrender - Yeah - I often reminisce about this feeling you've so beautifully scribed about - In the days where butterflys were abundant and the lightening bugs at nighttime - right before the barbecue dinner.

    Very nice poem TOM - thanx for the share ;)

    Jacquii.


    Posted By MsJacquiiC | Apr 22, 2007
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    Bear JPiC Contributor

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    Ms J

    Thank you once again for your wonderful comments
    hugs kisses
    tom


    Posted By Bear | Apr 23, 2007
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