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Discussion in 'Creative Traditional' started by Bear, Feb 18, 2008.



    Bear JPiC Contributor

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    Wind Chimes
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    Echoing through the realms on a quiet breeze
    Reflections of thoughts all through time
    with auras of blue, orange, grays and reds
    Brilliant pearls of golden sun droplets
    ~
    Trickle down the greenish brass tubes,
    While the quiet breeze waltz’s through
    The dragons purple/turquoise scales,
    Whimsical music, daring arias
    Desires for harmony.


    Posted By Bear | Feb 18, 2008
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    Mysty JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    Exquisite .. as always Dear Bear...... Love the use of brilliant colors :)

    :hug::hug:

    Mysty


    Posted By Mysty | Feb 18, 2008
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    Bear JPiC Contributor

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    Thank you once again my sweet beautiful Love Mysty
    hugs kisses
    bear


    Posted By Bear | Feb 19, 2008
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    Mohammad Ilyas New Member

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    Strongly and good but Dear I can not call you being a human as Bear.

    Bear JPiC Contributor

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    Mohammad

    Thank you for your great comment and you can call me tom if you'd like its ok
    handshakes
    beaar


    Posted By Bear | Feb 20, 2008
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    Mohammad Ilyas New Member

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    OK Mr. Thomas. Best Wishes.

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    Nice Bear,
    Colorful with lots of cool images.


    Posted By JolieH | Feb 20, 2008
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    Bear JPiC Contributor

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    Thank you so much Jolie for your beautiful comment
    hugs kisses
    bear


    Posted By Bear | Feb 21, 2008
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    I love windchimes and I can fairly hear yours...reminds me of one of my haiku....

    windchimes
    stir in a sudden breeze -
    dragonwings!


    Posted By BekiLynn | Feb 23, 2008
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    Bear JPiC Contributor

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    thats very prettty Bekilynn and thank you for your lovely comment I to love chimes I like to close my eyes and let the wind and chimes takes to placces of long ago.
    hugs kisses
    bear


    Posted By Bear | Feb 23, 2008
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    samson smith New Member

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    Wow!! Very nice, it is really very nice poem. Wind chimes are a great gift. Wind chimes provide endless music for everyone who hears. The variety of the sound ensures a different sound for every chime. They are not only used for tree branches or houses, more recently they have been used for decorations for celebrations. So, thanks for sharing this beautiful poem.

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