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    Starr New Member

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    Dishes piled up
    in the sink

    CD player's
    on the blink

    Drafts mix
    with the catbox stink

    Winter sucks-
    Fingers turn pink

    Every street's
    a friggin' skating rink

    And I can't wait 'til summer,
    cuz winter's a fuckin' bummer.


    Posted By Starr | Feb 25, 2008
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    Åströmmer New Member

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    I've had days like that too

    Very nice wording, simple and efficient, made me smile and remeber days when I felt just like that.

    Åströmmer

    ps. lose the cat ;-)

    Moonchild Moon Goddess of Whispers

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    Very simple and clear writing.
    I like it and I agree. Enjoyed!


    Posted By Moonchild | Mar 2, 2008
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    Starr New Member

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    I'm glad u liked it, Karen! I'll be glad when it's springtime! Take care. Love, Starr


    Posted By Starr | Mar 4, 2008
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