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    JolieH JPiC Contributor

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    From the future looking back,
    I smile at her.
    Do you remember this night?
    She’s sleeping, dreaming of a life.

    We wrote a poem that night.
    I read to her.
    Do you remember the words?
    She’s fishing, casting a lure.

    I sent a wish to her.
    I hope it came true.
    Do you remember the star?
    It’s shooting, across the sky.

    I showed a picture to her
    I found in a box.
    Why are you so sad, I asked?
    She’s wishing, I was there.


    Posted By JolieH | Jan 31, 2008
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    Moonchild Moon Goddess of Whispers

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    Oh this is beautiful and
    nostalgic at it's best!
    You captured the poetics with flair with this one.
    Love this to bits!
    A keeper and a fav of mine!


    Posted By Moonchild | Feb 4, 2008
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    Mysty JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    Ahh Jolie ..... Very very lovely..... brings me back to when I was younger ....looking at pics of my mothers childhood. *sighs.... * Do you know when I visited the french quarter in New Orleans..... I had flashbacks to an earlier time ....... as a child. But my parents had never been there. I also had flashbacks to being a woman of ..... well can't say ill repute .... I was well sought after.... I was french and dark haired but alabaster skinned, flashing eyes full of fire and passion. I was running away through an area that when I was there a few years ago was old and run down. Tall buildings..... apartments. Anyways I digress. I love this write of yours Jolie. Brings back memories. Thank you hon.

    Love Mysty


    Posted By Mysty | Feb 5, 2008
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