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    Bear JPiC Contributor

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    She played her clarinet softly into the wind,
    Her aria’s drifted into the forest and fields
    As we sat down by the rippling River,
    Watching as it slowly flowed by,
    We caught a glimpse of a shadow,
    Of an eagle that soared above,.
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    On the edge of the river, where we are sitting,
    Are flowers that nature had grown.
    Their vivid colors reflection, in the crystal blue water,
    Their color was enhanced by the sun’s rays.
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    We were mesmerized by the wonderful sounds and beauty,.
    The ambiance gave our souls a much needed rest
    We felt closer to the garden of Eden surrounding us,
    And the fragrance only heightened our experience.
    Even as she plays her beautiful melodies,
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    There's nothing more magnificent then the beauty of nature,
    When put into the proper perspective.
    God created this majestic scenery
    And nature’s reflection is of His hue.
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    Flower's bloom all around the world,.
    The World is his majestic garden,
    And He has a mystical way of planting flowers, bushes and trees,
    By using the birds and the bees and the winds.
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    The sun, clouds, and rain nurture the plants,
    And the Soil feeds the seed,
    And nature lives in harmony,
    Even the unwanted weeds are welcomed!.


    Posted By Bear | Mar 17, 2007
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    Dear Bear,

    Can a poem be so beautiful, that one can be almost lost for words? You did it again. You placed me there in the poem, seeing the hues, smelling the fragrances, hearing the rush of the water flow, reminiscing in the clarinet, and soaring piggyback upon the Eagle's wings. Simply exquisite in every way, shape, and form. I read this several times, and each time, I was mesmerized. Thank you for sharing this with us. Beautiful and Uplifting!!

    {{{{~~~***PAINTED***~~~}}}}:girltender:

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    Thank you so very very much for this fantastic comment
    hugs kisses
    tom


    Posted By Bear | Apr 21, 2007
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