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    You could believe I kept a diary,
    Because of the fact of my mind,
    That is craving for a good memory,
    But still, with a diary i cannot the time rewind.

    Within these four walls,
    I live in a trap,
    I am walking in a labyrinth,
    Without something to call a map.

    Within these four walls,
    On the back I wish for a tap,
    Because of the fact that I am scared,
    You could realize, of the run of patience,
    This is my last time around in this trap.

    I see dreams of you,
    Them, I wouldnt describe as a nightmare,
    Because of the sound of the music,
    And our feet bare,
    On a marble floor.

    We're dancing, and the room has no lights on,
    Yet the room is filled with a purple spark,
    And the scent of magic is becoming so strong.

    My head is resting on you shoulder,
    So close I can feel your skin,
    It's warmer than mine,
    And less scared within.

    Within these four walls,
    I pretend like nothing has happened...


    Posted By ¤Me¤ | Mar 13, 2007
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    Me! This is fantastic! I can feel all the emotions landscaped across this canvas.
    Then the secret sweetness of imagined love, and taking strength from that image.
    Those are the best, because they are usually exactly what you need. Beautifully written!
    [FONT=&quot]:girllove: :angel:
    Nomad[/FONT]

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    Thank you nomad :D Glad you liked it ;)


    Posted By ¤Me¤ | Mar 14, 2007
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    This is a great weave
    of emotions and
    pictures written.

    Really nice.

    Thanks for the
    read.


    Posted By Jeez | Mar 14, 2007
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    Thanks for the comment :D


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