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    papasan22 PenDragon

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    To My Kelly~~

    The sweetness of your tender kiss,
    your succulent surprise of bliss,
    your eyes that pour the rhyme of truth,
    your inner vision most aloof.

    My Love for you, a spiral maze,
    this moment's stare is but a phase.
    When true, my gaze falls short of thee,
    I'll drink your cup of mystery.

    Written By Mark Roske
    Copyright 2007


    Posted By papasan22 | Jun 30, 2007
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    beautiful dedication to you beautiful love excellent penning
    handshakes
    bear


    Posted By Bear | Jun 30, 2007
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    louisianagal529 New Member

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    hey .. wow i love this poem. i dont understand the part about "your inner vision most aloof" but that was it.

    beautifully versed

    papasan22 PenDragon

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    Thanx

    Most Aloof>>>>>>>>>
    To be above, and OR disconnected from~~~~
    Blessings & Love,
    PenDragon


    Posted By papasan22 | Jun 30, 2007
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    Jer4clarity Lover of Meanings

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    Pappasan,

    This is touching. I'm sure your luv in the picture....Got the picture!

    My Fav:

    Jerry

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    yeah i understand the word itself but i was confused on why the word was used in that context.

    if you're in love with a person shouldn't they be clear as day and as if nothing could tear them apart? so i was confused why that word was chosen that's all.

    i reread it later and i think i know why it was used that way tho. thnx tho

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