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    TamareEsperes New Member

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    shadows askewed, falling upon curtains in wait.
    Empty perfume bottles and flowers hung,
    this old room brings nostalgia.
    A place I was so long ago,
    detachment is no option.
    Apart of me it is still,
    I am here years ago now.
    lying in wait thinking of being
    somewhere else, but i think
    as I am here a time before, theres no
    place Id rather be.
    This room is you, mysterious and empty.
    years ago........Now you've changed and I'm away.
    I cant cross a mirror that reflects my mistakes.

    Moonchild Moon Goddess of Whispers

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    A very nostalgic poem.
    It was well thought and cleverly written.
    I really enjoyed, thanks, very good!


    Posted By Moonchild | Aug 6, 2007
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    PaintedDiary JPiC Mentor

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    One bottle half empty
    of malachite tears
    shards of glass potpourri
    I was once there
    long ago paints like now
    new sand of mirrors
    mistakes play on piano
    I am still here
    nostalgia opens
    the curtain once more
    and I am
    center stage

    Beautiful write and vivid images. I loved it! Thank you for sharing.

    Kim :)

    KayaOtah happy as ever

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    Wow, nice poem again. I could imagine myself there... and also I like the poem PD used as comment.


    Posted By KayaOtah | Aug 7, 2007
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