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    Uneasy to explain,
    Uneasy to understand,
    How in each other we always leave a mark,
    For a scar I have in my heart and my hand.

    Even when you lock the door,
    It doesnt make you leave,
    And yet I am letting you go.

    Uneasy to compare,
    Uneasy to proceed,
    How sometimes you can't die although you get killed,
    For I've been starving to death without a craving need.

    Even when you say you're not the speaking to me,
    It doesnt mean you can't scream,
    And yet i am letting you be.

    Uneasy to explain,
    Uneasy to understand,
    How you can't die,
    And yet you can hurt on demand.


    Posted By ¤Me¤ | Mar 31, 2007
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    WOW Mex....... and I thought I could be cryptic. It is like a war inside one's mind..... should I or shouldn't I, will I or won't I..... or am I wrong in my perception.. well irregardless. Very skillfully done BRAVO!!!

    Mysty


    Posted By Mysty | Mar 31, 2007
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    Ah... the bad and
    good in thoes we think
    we know????

    Then... the bad and
    good in our selves
    that we seldom see????:2fart:


    Posted By Jeez | Apr 6, 2007
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    Another very good poem hun :D
    Awesome work! =)


    Posted By Tanax | Apr 26, 2007
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    ME - How are you? Long time to see…This almost seems like you are addressing “love”, and trying to deal with all the arbitrary and painful aspects of it…as alive as it is…maybe not, but that’s what it sounds like to me.




    Nice one! Complex and mind-bending...


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    Hey :D Thank you for the comments, and yes i know i havent been here for a long while. But the semester at school and at my dance school is soon finished, and i have to take all my free time on both of them. I'm performing in three different dance shows in less than a month, and i have 9 exams coming up in the next two weeks. I've been studying in busses going to town or to school, because at home i have no time. I hope i can come here more, and when i get to have the time i will.
    And of course there has been trouble in my life i have to think through...surprise surprise..


    Posted By ¤Me¤ | Apr 28, 2007
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    Dear Me,

    :wow::wow::bravothanx: This was simply INCREDIBLE!!!!!! How true it is, and every word is FELT here. All the words soaked my entire mind and lingers throughout. I am speechless! BRILLIANT WRITE!!!!!!!!!:yay:

    {{{{~~~***KIM***~~~}}}}:)

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    Thanks Kim :D I'm glad you liked it.


    Posted By ¤Me¤ | Apr 29, 2007
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