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    Charlotte Rutigliano New Member

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    Should the light of day
    Ruin the beauty of the
    Moon, a beauty like
    The young love we share, so true.
    See the beauty of this love.


    Like this day so young,
    Every moment I spend with
    You, our love seems so
    Strong, we get closer as time
    Goes by, the words seem real.


    As the the days go by,
    We grow together and still
    Our love groms stronger,
    The words are as real as they
    get< keep saying I love you.

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    "If the words are as real as they get," then why the need to keep saying I Love you? I love the way you begin but I think it's impossible for the light of day to ruin the beauty of the moon, it only provides a temporary covering so that it can be appreciated anew when the light of day sleeps.

    Thank you for sharing your thoughts.


    Posted By Gamaliel | May 2, 2011
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