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    “Your Beautiful Mind”

    Is the sunset
    God used
    To put my mind to rest
    ~
    Your beautiful mind
    Was the sunrise
    I looked into
    Thinking of you
    ~
    Your friendship
    Continues to grow
    Like a summer rain
    ~
    It’s the greatest part
    Of whom you are
    ~
    You are one of a few
    Yes
    The very first one
    That stood out from the rest
    ~
    Beauty to be admired
    Letters from your heart
    Turned into words
    Molded into a beautiful
    Poem
    ~
    A poem for all to read
    Cherish
    For the rest of their lives
    ~
    Like the first rose of spring
    Rain delicately running off your petals
    A memory set in my mind
    Your bouquet
    Never
    Never leaving
    But resting
    In between the words
    That escapes your beautiful
    Mind

    Arthur Henn

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    I wasn't even in the mood for reading poetry yet your poetry was too good to ignore,
    very cool
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    PaintedDiary JPiC Mentor

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    Dear Art,

    Simply lovely in concept, movement, execution, and affectiveness. Just amazing..:wow: I am at a loss for words...guess that says it all. Thank you for sharing.

    Kim :)
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    Hey now PIM,

    Yeah, great pennin' here.... I read it a few times - I liked mucho..........


    Posted By lasher | Aug 22, 2007
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    nomadicrhymer JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    My goodness, Art...you did it once again...oh, to have thoughts of pure liquid love like the ones that flow from this poem!

    Is the sunset
    God used
    To put my mind to rest
    ~
    Your beautiful mind
    Was the sunrise
    I looked into
    Thinking of you
    ~
    Your friendship
    Continues to grow
    Like a summer rain


    Stunning rendition...:wow:

    Nomad
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    WOW Art .... You are addicting me to your poetry. Tis quite beautiful. This woman you write about is a lucky woman indeed.

    Love Mysty


    Posted By Mysty | Aug 22, 2007
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    TheBlackPoet New Member

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    this is one of those few kinds of poems that is not dressed up with a lot of flair... or over written to impress, but a simple comparative poem.. it has been my observation, that these are the poems that become classics....

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